Yes this is perfect . Yes know one will make any thing like this .Finished! I love thisss.
The next day.
Who made this . I do not know but it is amazing . I am going to touch the statue . Oh no. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!! Umm….. I broke it. YOU BROKE A AMAZING PIECE OF ART! Well we could glue it back together? We could try. Ok well lets go home and fix it tomorrow.
The next day
Ahhhh what happened to my statue. Starts to cry a lot . Oh know . What have we done.
Suhani, you are amazing at keeping the promp up and not going to another subject. Keeping it all about fixing the statue
Good Job Suhani! No spelling mistakes i saw which is good 🙂
Hello Suhani, I think it is good how you have been able to show the passage of time in relation to the one event. Also the different responses to the breaking of the statue creates interest for the reader and shows just how distressing the breakage was.