Wow this place is magical. I didn’t know frogs could fly! Wait, Wait, Wait before we explore this place you need to understand what it took to get here. It was a beautiful morning when decided to go for a camping trip. I arrived at my camp site and put down my tent. But I saw something glistening in the bushes, and it sort of looked like a path way that lead some where. I Went down the path and saw this place. Back to me. I heard a stomp behind me. How was I going to escape this!
I really liked how you started with a very peaceful place and created this danger feeling at the end. Well done!
thank you for the nice coment! i will for sure read some your storys