the storm

It was a normal day when a big storm broke out. This storm was bigger than any storm in  Cannes city. I started to panic. I ran around trying to find shelter but I could not find a place to stay. “ Which way to the shops?” I panted. I knew that the shops could be a place that I could stay at. I heard a voice say, “to your left,” so I turned and ran as fast as I could. I got in the shops with soggy cloths on but I was happy to have shelter. And I watched  as the storm calmed down .


One thought on “the storm”

  1. Hey suhani
    i really like this story it suits the promt alot! One thing is ( for me) Maybe add a little bit more punctuation but over all i think you did an amzing job!!! Keep up the AMAZING work!!!

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